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The shadow moved on the wall,

but she wasn't doing anything at all.

It jumped up and down,

while she was on the ground,

bloodied and crying,

sullied and dying.


Triumph filled the shadow man,

watching her do what she can

to stay with the living.

He was not so forgiving.

This was payback for all she had done.

For all the lies she had spun.


The love was not real,

so his heart he did seal

in a box deep inside,

a place he could hide

all his feelings and woes.


She let go of her sorrows,

greeting death with a smile on her face.

He got out of that place

as fast as his feet could take him.


The shadow man cursed his whim

to kill the woman he once adored.

But he wanted more.

More blood on his hands

to meet the demands

of his sick, black heart.


It was just the start.
I put this in free and blank verse because I HAD NO IDEA WHERE ELSE TO PUT IT. LOL.

Anyways, once again, something not crack and really weird and dark. I'm sorry guys. ;A; Once again, my funk remains. LOL

So yeah, there you go.
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lovely-boy Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
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IrishBostonianMofo Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
I LOVE THAT SONG. :heart:

ILU
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lovely-boy Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
LMFAO
I DON'T

BUT ILU TOO, WHORE
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IrishBostonianMofo Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2010
FAGGOT <3
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:iconiloveyouplz: I ENVY YOUR SKILLS.
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IrishBostonianMofo Featured By Owner Sep 11, 2010
;A; THANK YOU :heart:
I ENVY /YOUR/ SKILLS~
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TheSchemingNocturne Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
This is actually quite lovely. Very expresive, and it has amazing vizualization with it.
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IrishBostonianMofo Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
:'D THANK YOU SO MUCH~ :heart:
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shaerein Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010  Hobbyist Digital Artist
kdsjfkdsjfh I LOVE IT
I love your rhymingggggg :heart:
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IrishBostonianMofo Featured By Owner Sep 10, 2010
AWWW, THANK YOU~! :heart: :meow:
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